You have developed a very good production, and your editing has been key. You are missing your magazine and poster, please add these.
My tips are that you go over all your posts and ensure you are happy with the level of detail. You have correctly added references, which is great. However I feel you would benefit from following the PEE format. Please look at Jodies (last years student) to look at the level of detail required for a high grade.
You have developed a very good production, and your editing has been key. You are missing your magazine and poster, please add these.
ReplyDeleteMy tips are that you go over all your posts and ensure you are happy with the level of detail. You have correctly added references, which is great. However I feel you would benefit from following the PEE format. Please look at Jodies (last years student) to look at the level of detail required for a high grade.